Saturday, June 19, 2010

Snapped


Leaf shadows played on her face
and he envied the tree
that kissed her so freely

Spreading a blanket with
cheese and fruit and baguettes
he hoped here to share
the first of all the rest of their lives

She, not of the same mind,
partook as though of the forbidden fruit
not inviting him to partake

Then she was gone - into the wilderness
where he gladly would have followed
now left only with crumbs
he snapped the knife blade closed

15 comments:

RA said...

Beautiful, simply beautiful. :)

Brian Miller said...

smiles. a wonderful picture, until the moment she is gone...nicely done mgapie...

Gabriela Abalo said...

great magpie!!

fresh and simple

loveNlight
Gabi

Sam Liu said...

This is such a wonderfully lyrical poem, you have a truly charming classical style that is a delight to read. Marvellous Magpie! :)

Helen said...

Love lost ... nicely written!

Lyn said...

I can feel the disappointment so "sharply"..good magpie!

Linda said...

Beautiful imagery. But for the crumbs left behind, she may not have been there at all.

Helena said...

A delicately put piece. How we often just watch love go.

Everyday Goddess said...

not on the same page, but at least he tried.

great magging!

Tumblewords: said...

The pain of loss. Nice work!

Anonymous said...

I love this...I love the mystery and wonder of the piece...bkm

Tess Kincaid said...

Oh, the pain of unrequited love. Beautifully written.

Kathe W. said...

Sweetly sad. Nice Magpie

Anonymous said...

really sumptuous imagery!This is my first time reading a Magpie by you, but I hope it wont be the last! Great job!

Aoife.Troxel said...

Leaf shadows played on her face and he envied the tree that kissed her so freely
Such beautiful images and feelings...